I really digged you both, Waus wins on lyrics and i guess Murdaa wins on flow.
"Repeating my lines"? That never happened. "When the uzi shoots njugguh!" That was really lame :). I kinda digged Waus' accent, but yeah the sound quality was pretty bad.
For me the winner is Waus.
yur mom was lame.
When i said "Repeating my lines" i heard em say my line... unlike you lucky people who get to listen and read along.. I didn't have that luxury. I didnt know what he was saying.. so when he said "For example this, if never said im stacking chips" I thought he was repeatin the line.. where i said what i said. Chillax. Lyrics dont mean shit if u cant deliver it properly.. cause then no one can hear you. If i never been the nice guy and put up the lyrics.. it prolly woulda changed ur mind.
Heres my opinion.
Good melody but it didnt sounds mastered at all, it hurt my ears a little.
I was also missing the drums, it only consisted of a bass drum and a high hat, therefor this does not fit in the DnB section.
But again i liked it overal, but it needs some more work in my opinion.
Yeah I'm not very experienced with mastering, as all my songs are originally midi, and I was only introduced into the audio-mixing process a year or two ago...
I'm also not very literate with the specifics of genre classification, as I generally think of all electronic music as techno, so I struggle to get my songs sub-classified correctly sometimes.
This inspired me to spend my few hours of free time on music again,
Really clean and smooth dude :)
This deserves the top list,
Goed bezig ;)
This sound is so terrible, i know that was your intention so you did a fine job :)
I could not even hear out the whole thing because my ears hurt so much.
The guitar thingy was very good, but the drums were too empty for my taste.
Overall fine job, but could be better ;)
Yea, I dont have time to be working on it atm
Awesome dude, i like the sample you used.
I used to listen to that song quite a lot when i was younger :)
Though i dont really like the part from 0:47, nevertheless i'm digging it.
The piano sounded a bit harsh on the ears, though you made it sound good.
The drums were a bit empty and sounded very modern ( i mean they sound like computer noises )
This is just my opinion, i know a lot of people like these kind of drums.
Overal you did a pretty nice job :)
Next time, put some mastering on the piano, or make it softer.
Yeh i thought so too, i compressed the hell out of it but eh, just couldn't cut it back too much or else they disappeared behind the bass and strings.
The drums well yeh i was trying to get a modern sound...but the snare kinda ruined it i think.
I love the piano
Great job, very touching.
I find this very origional, you don't hear the piano like this a lot.
Sorry to hear that about your father, good luck with it.
he died in 2001 actually so ive had time to 'cope.
Not that i can hold a tear when i go through childtime photos, even dropped one looking for a photo of him for the CD pic.
I mean i'll always miss having him around.
Thanks for finding this original. I have more piano works if you like it.
Excuse me for swearing,
But this is just god damn fucking awesome!
Damn, another fine piece.
It's odd yet mellow, great job. :)
Good luck on your next one.
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